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I値l lie down in my bed
And listen to the sounds
Of my innocent sister crying
And my troubled father dying

In these times of solitary
I reflect upon my life
I remember all the events
That caused me the most strife

I think about my life
And all the pain its brought
All the pain I致e given
Al the lessons life had taught

I値l think about the abuser
I値l think about the witch
I値l think about the cutter
I値l think about the bitch

I値l think about the killer
I値l think about the tears
I値l think about the pain
I値l think about the fears

And as these thoughts cycle
Burning tears into my eyes
I値l think about the people
Who have lived, killed and died

Then your face comes to my head
And all is now at best
I値l think about this person
Who shines out above the rest
©2005-2009 ~Leftover-EiDos
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written last night while I was listening to my sister attempt to forget about her ex boyfriend and to ignore his phone calls. I lay down in my bed thinking about life and everything... And this poem... just happend I guess.

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:iconandhakara:
Great poem, has a great sense of emotion, but that may just because I've been there too.

--
Who died and made you Keats? You get a cookie if you figure out the joke!

Moving to a new city!
:iconlosthotty91:
You are extremely talented. I love this poem. I can so relate.
:iconleftover-eidos:
Im really glad you could relate to it, thank you for the fav <3
:iconleftover-eidos:
opps sorry wrong comment ^_^''
:iconleftover-eidos:
thank you so much <3 thank you for your comment it is really appreciated <3 And thank you heaps for the fav
:iconlinteli:
Deep and beautiful thoughts once again Lyn. I know the situation and as the previous commentors have said, I truly can relate to it. Great job! :hug:

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Never lose your childish innocence.
:iconleftover-eidos:
thanks ^_^ im so glad yu can relate
:icondevilsrose666:
I realy like this poem! 3x fav! I dont have to say it but I will anyway "I can relate to it" =P
:iconleftover-eidos:
thank you, It always brings a smile to my face when people can relate to what I write.

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